More Than Action
by Viji K. Chary
When I was in middle school, I used to
read the same books over and over again. Most were below my reading
level. At that time, I was not interesting in reading middle-school
books. I found them lacking in excitement - too many books with long
descriptive passages, undecipherable characters and not enough
action.
So, when my sixth grade teacher, Ms.
Kahn assigned the class to write a story, the first thing I put in
was action. Looking back, that was the only good writing trait in
that story!
I wrote about a main character who swam
a race across a lake with her friend. Soon after the race began,
‘something’ pulled on her foot. Scared, she climbed out of the
lake and ran to the other side.