The Friday 56

by Billy Burgess on Friday, March 18, 2011 in The Friday 56

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His diction was too perfect, the whites of his eyes too clear,

almost crystalline clear . . . and he smelled fresh,

like a baby's newborn scent.

page 56, Surrender the Dark by L.A. Banks

6 comments:

Kelly's MomFriday, March 18, 2011 5:47:00 AM
Great one! Love all the descriptions!

Here's mine: click here
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Laurel-Rain SnowFriday, March 18, 2011 10:31:00 AM
Very descriptive...and I'm curious about this perfection....

Here's MY FRIDAY MEMES POST
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TashaFriday, March 18, 2011 10:59:00 AM
Nice! You can't go wrong smelling like a newborn baby. :) Here's a look at mine... Happy reading!!
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JanFriday, March 18, 2011 1:11:00 PM
Nice imagery! Here's my Friday 56 from Hearts Aglow
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fredamansFriday, March 18, 2011 4:53:00 PM
I love that smell! Thanks for participating!
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vvb32 readsSunday, March 20, 2011 1:24:00 PM
ooo, i'm intrigued who is "he"?
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