Showing posts with label Writing Tips Wednesdays. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing Tips Wednesdays. Show all posts

Wednesday, December 2, 2015

Gaming The Mind to Write


 

Writers will tell you that switching from the kinetic real world to the unchatered blank page can cause a paralyzing shock. I find playing an electronic game heats up my word making and paragraph baking skills. A word game helps to focus on the writing task at hand, but other games that require focus on a smaller than life object also help. Games flip the cone of concentration from outward reality to the inward creative potential.

A great place to find unique games that you can play in the isolation of your writing environment can be purchased online from stores such as Hammacher Schlemmer, Brookstone, and Lord and Taylor. Standard games and gadgets are found at Kohls, Office Depot, and J.C. Penny's.

Two stores that are worth venturing into the real world to shop, especially around the holidays, are Macy's and Neiman Marcus. Macy's stores are alive with magic on every floor. Larger than life nutcracker soldiers and huge ornaments like ruby planets greet you at every landing. Golden garlands arch across the ceilings and there are often Christmas-themed performances. The window displays at Macy's offer up scenes that enchant even the most worried writer into concocting sugar plum sweet pages. Neiman Marcus transports the holiday shopper to the sky with their atrium soaring Christmas trees and upscale, diamond-studded, holiday window exhibits.

Wednesday, September 2, 2015

3 Reasons You Need a Writing Coach


Have you ever thought about getting a writing coach? A writing coach is a person who can help you find your place in the writing world and coach you toward becoming your best writing self. A coach acts similarly to a critique group, but with more purpose. Depending on how involved you and your coach are, using one can dramatically increase your chances of getting published.

Here are three reasons why you might want to find a writing coach:

A Writing Coach Can Show You the Ropes

Your writing coach should be a person who is already published, ideally in a similar genre/field as you want to be in. The writing coach can help share the process she went through toward getting published in that industry. She will share tips about what editors are looking for, inconsistencies in your writing, trends in the industry, and much more.

A Writing Coach Can Help You Improve

You probably don’t think your work is the best thing ever, but sometimes an outside prospective is exactly what you need to get past any blocks in your writing. A third party can see issues with your writing and stories that you cannot and help you find a better way to say what you are trying to say. Some coaches may even help edit your work, depending on how much you are willing to pay them.

A Writing Coach Can Help Get Your Work in Front of the Right People

A person who has been published is an invaluable resource. This person knows how to get something published and who needs to see your work before it can start its way onto the publishing process. A writing coach can help you find an agent, publisher, editor, and even a PR team, when you are finally able to become published.


If you plan on becoming a published writer one day, a writing coach will be your best friend.
Brenda is a fellow book-lover and coffee-addict. She is a freelance writer, punctuation nerd, and grammar enthusiast. Her favorite book genres are Science Fiction, Fantasy with a Twist, and Dystopian. Brenda blogs about books, writing and more at Daily Mayo. Find her here on CaW for Writing Tips Wednesdays the first Wednesday of every month.

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Wednesday, August 5, 2015

3 Easy Tips for Filling a Writing Rut


Writers must create copy in varying styles even if they only work in one industry or genre. For example, an author not only has to write the fictional content for her book, but she may also need to create promotional materials, have her own author blog, and write to connect with fans.

If you find everything you write sounds boring and the same, you may be in a writing rut. Use these three tips to get out fast.

Personalize It

Bland copy is boring copy. Add in funny phrasings or personal stories to make things more interesting. Most writing is meant to entertain. Be flexible and have fun with your writing. Even a subject as dry as car repair can be a little more interesting if you tell the story of how you accidentally wired the car to honk every time the windshield wipers were turned on. However, unless you are writing pure fiction, don’t make the stories up. Be the person you really are. This is why all my stories revolve around books and science journals that I read online.

Write the Opposite

I like to refresh my writing palate by writing something completely different. If I had any musical talent, I might take this even further by trying to write a song instead of a different kind of writing, but things are what they are.

If you are writing a non-fiction piece, write something fiction just for fun. If you are writing fiction, try writing a personal essay. Or, if you have the talent, try creating something completely different, like art or a song. Writing is an art, too, and you may be surprised how much your writing changes and evolves for the better after you do something completely different.

Write Something Just for Fun

Everyone who is an aspiring/career writer probably got into it because they loved it. I found myself in a freelance writing career because I originally wanted to write books. However, deadlines and career responsibilities pulls the fun out of it sometimes.

Mix things up by writing something just for fun. You may never use that piece anywhere, but no-pressure writing can be an amazing thing. This is something I’m going to try myself soon, as I got completely burned out by fiction writing when I participated in NaNoWriMo in 2013.

Have you ever been stuck in a writing rut?
Find 5 more ways to get out of a writing rut here!

Brenda is a fellow book-lover and coffee-addict. She is a freelance writer, punctuation nerd, and grammar enthusiast. Her favorite book genres are Science Fiction, Fantasy with a Twist, and Dystopian. Brenda blogs about books, writing and more at Daily Mayo. Find her here on CaW for Writing Tips Wednesdays the first Wednesday of every month.

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Wednesday, July 1, 2015

3 Free Courses that Will Help You Become a Better Writer


Everyone wants to learn how to be a better writer. Even if you don't want to write books one day, we all have to write in everyday life with e-mails, business letters, legal issues, and more. Knowing how to write is an invaluable skill. 

If you don't have a lot of money to invest in writing training, you may feel like you have no options to become a better writer. 

Luckily, these three online writing courses are completely free and can help you learn to write better today!

Technical Writing from Open Courseware

Technical writing is something everyone has to do no matter whether you sell houses, fight fires, or are an author. This specific course outlines helpful tips through video lessons on content creation, resume building, e-mails, concise copy, and more.


Introduction to Writing for Children from Falmouth University

This course is completed with two video courses outlining tips for writing for children. Writing for children is a little different than writing for adults, and any writer interested in writing for children should check out this free online writing course.

Take the course:

Write What You Know from the Writing University

The Writing University offers practical and helpful podcasts on a variety of writing techniques. All lessons are useful, but this lesson talking about how you can “write what you know” without limiting yourself is particularly helpful to new and old writers alike.

With a little practice and training, both the most novice of writers and the most veteran writer can improve their skills. Writing, just like many skills, is just something that improves with practice and time!

Where do you go to become a better writer? What are your favorite courses? 

Find 10 more resources for free online writing courses here!

Brenda is a fellow book-lover and coffee-addict. She is a freelance writer, punctuation nerd, and grammar enthusiast. Her favorite book genres are Science Fiction, Fantasy with a Twist, and Dystopian. Brenda blogs about books, writing and more at Daily Mayo. Find her here on CaW for Writing Tips Wednesdays the first Wednesday of every month.

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Wednesday, June 3, 2015

3 Reasons Why Your Editor Should Be Your Best Friend


A lot of writers feel wary of editors and editing. These writers are afraid that using an editor will remove their voice and meaning from the story and transform it into something else entirely.

Although there are plenty of bad editors out there, an editor is not something to fear and feedback on writing will usually only make it better. Here are three reasons why using an editor can improve your writing.

Editors Provide Balance

If you think about writing like the Force from Star Wars, editors are the Jedi of writing. Their job is to provide balance to any story to make sure that evil and good don’t take up too much room in the story. Editors offer the right balance between plot, descriptions, narrative, dialogue, and every other element of a story or other piece of writing to create a balanced, entertaining piece that presents the story in the best way possible. Adding in enough “bad” elements can prevent a story from feeling too sappy and fake. Conversely, not enough “good” can make a story feel bleak. Editors help all writers find that balance.

Editors Refuse Sub-Par Writing

Lazy writing is easy. Good writing is hard. Most writers start with lazy writing. The words are a rough draft on the page. The editor’s job is to find the weak points of any story (with plot and with writing style) and tweak it until it is precise and offers the best version of the story. No one would want to read any of To Kill a Mockingbird if it sounded like a third-grader wrote it.

Editors Push Limits

A good editor is designed to help writers reach their maximum potential. Similar to how editors don’t allow lazy writing; an editor will help a writer find their best writing limits. Maybe you don’t think you can write as well as bestselling author Famous One, but with a little direction and pushing, maybe you can write something just as good. Editors search for perfection and find it in you.

No matter what industry you are in, editing is one of the most important parts of the writing process. You can do some of your own editing, but the benefit of using an outside source (and preferably a professional editor) is invaluable and will make the end result that much better.

Do you use an editor? Why or why not?



Brenda is a fellow book-lover and coffee-addict. She is a freelance writer, punctuation nerd, and grammar enthusiast. Her favorite book genres are Science Fiction, Fantasy with a Twist, and Dystopian. Brenda blogs about books, writing and more at Daily Mayo. Find her here on CaW for Writing Tips Wednesdays the first Wednesday of every month.

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Wednesday, May 6, 2015

3 Inspirational Passages from Bestselling Authors


Sometimes, the best writing tip is simply to read really good writing. Good writers inspire today’s writers to aim for the best. When I write, I like to immerse myself in my favorite writer’s voices and channel them into my own writing. These three passages are some of the most beautiful passages currently published.

The land seemed full of creaking and cracking and sly noises, but there was no sound of voice or of foot. Far above the Ephel Dúath in the West the night-sky was still dim and pale. There, peeping among the cloud-wrack above a dark tor high up in the mountains, Sam saw a white star twinkle for a while. The beauty of it smote his heart, as he looked up out of the forsaken land, and hope returned to him. For like a shaft, clear and cold, the thought pierced him that in the end the Shadow was only a small and passing thing: there was light and high beauty for ever beyond its reach.

- J.R.R. Tolkien, The Return of the King



"The sun had not yet risen. The sea was indistinguishable from the sky, except that the sea was slightly creased as if a cloth had wrinkles in it. Gradually as the sky whitened a dark line lay on the horizon dividing the sea from the sky and gray cloth became barred with thick strokes moving, one after another, beneath the surface, following each other, pursuing each other, perpetually."

Virginia Woolf, The Waves


"I am the sum total of everything that went before me, of all I have been seen done, of everything done-to-me. I am everyone everything whose being-in-the-world affected was affected by mine. I am anything that happens after I've gone which would not have happened if I had not come. Nor am I particularly exceptional in this matter; each "I," every one of the now-six-hundred-million-plus of us, contains a similar multitude. I repeat for the last time: to understand me, you'll have to swallow a world."

Salim Sinai, Midnight's Children



If these aren’t enough beautiful passages for you, this post has 9 more beautiful passages in literature. Happy writing!

Brenda is a fellow book-lover and coffee-addict. She is a freelance writer, punctuation nerd, and grammar enthusiast. Her favorite book genres are Science Fiction, Fantasy with a Twist, and Dystopian. Brenda blogs about books, writing and more at Daily Mayo. Find her here on CaW for Writing Tips Wednesdays the first Wednesday of every month.

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Wednesday, April 1, 2015

Writing Tips Wednesdays: 5 Common Grammar Mistakes You're Probably Making


If you’re a writer (and today, everyone is a writer to some extent), you probably know at least the very basics of grammar. All sentences should have a subject and a verb, for example.

However, did you also know that even the best of writers often fall into these grammar traps? Find out 5 common grammar mistakes everyone makes and how to fix them below:

“There Are” Sentences

There are 14 cows in the field. There are 12 birds. There are eight ways to tie your shoe.

All of these sentences start with “there are” and all of the sentences are boring. Sure, “there are” is an accurate statement in many cases, but too much use of the phrase sounds lazy and boring. Even if there are 14 cows in the field, try to make the sentence a little more exciting. “14 cows stood in a single line in farmer Jo’s field” is a more interesting sentence.

Neglecting Commas

Some writers are not sure when to use commas, so they avoid them altogether. This becomes a problem when you have a sentence like: before the students arrived the teacher cleaned the desks washed the windows and straightened the chairs. Your brain doesn’t know how to arrange the sentence, so you feel weird while reading it. Put the commas where they belong. Before the students arrived, the teacher cleaned the desks, washed the windows, and straightened the chairs.

Lose/Loose

Did you lose your loose change? Go find it then. I find this is normally a typo error, but it still is important to remember. Lose means to misplace, loose means not tight.


Parallel Errors

When you make a list, all of the verbs should agree. The kids washed the windows, drove to the store, to eat candy in the parking lot. This makes your brain hurt a bit, which should be avoided, if possible. Change that to eat to ate, and you’re good. Try to end all words with the same modifier, such as by using all “ing” words, or “ed” words.


Passive Voice Only

Passive voice is the use of “to be” verbs. Instead of the subject doing the action, the subject is being acted upon by something else.

This is passive: The paper was signed by all the children.
This is active: All the children signed the paper.

 Passive writing sounds sluggish and boring. You can’t always avoid passive voice, but try to keep it to a minimum.



What common grammar mistakes do you make most often? 

Didn't see your grammar error here? Find 10 more common grammar errors here.

Brenda is a fellow book-lover and coffee-addict. She is a freelance writer, punctuation nerd, and grammar enthusiast. Her favorite book genres are Science Fiction, Fantasy with a Twist, and Dystopian. Brenda blogs about books, writing and more at Daily Mayo. Find her here on CaW for Writing Tips Wednesdays the first Wednesday of every month.

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Wednesday, March 4, 2015

5 Unusual Ways to Motivate Yourself to Write



When it comes to writing tips, there are thousands of tips out there. Even though there are thousands of posts out there covering the same topic, many of these writing tips offer the same advice.

Today, I’m sharing with you a few unconventional ways that I’ve found work well to motivate yourself to write even when you don’t want to or don’t feel good.

Music

Music is a powerful mood-lifter, and it can also help you concentrated by blocking out unwanted noise and distractions. Some music acts like a sort of white noise that is ideal for writing and focusing. I’ve shared before how I like to listen to Biffy Clero, but there are thousands of artists out there that have created perfect music for writers. I particularly like these hobbit-themed songs.

 Dress Well

If you dress poorly, you won’t be motivated to do anything. I find that putting on something nice can dramatically improve my productivity, even if I really don’t feel like doing anything at all. Try it next time you sit down to write. Rather than wear comfy clothing, put on something you would wear to the office. You may be surprised at the difference.

Go to a New Location

It doesn’t make a whole lot of sense to me, but transporting yourself to a new location can work wonders for your productivity. I like writing at coffee shops, bookstores, and even swimming pools. You will get even more done if you don’t sign into the wifi.

 Try a New Writing Style

Bored of your current writing style? Why not try something different? If you always write news-style pieces, try writing a fiction piece instead. If you always write blog posts, try switching to magazine feature pieces. This not only keeps you from feeling bored, but it also expands your marketable skills.

Read Others

Reading the work of others is inspiring in two ways, according to Orson Scott Card. One, it will inspire you to try your best to create something amazing like that writer. Or, two, it will show that even *I* can write something better than that. Both of these views are powerful motivators.

What unusual motivation methods do you use?
Brenda is a fellow book-lover and coffee-addict. She is a freelance writer, punctuation nerd, and grammar enthusiast. Her favorite book genres are Science Fiction, Fantasy with a Twist, and Dystopian. Brenda blogs about books, writing and more at Daily Mayo. Find her here on CaW for Writing Tips Wednesdays the first Wednesday of every month.

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Wednesday, February 4, 2015

3 Simple Tips to Eliminate Distractions while Writing


As writers, it is our job to think. But in the age of distraction, finding the ability to focus is becoming a lost art.

I have worked as a writer for home for seven years. During that time, I’ve found a few tips and tricks that help me focus, eliminate distractions, and become a better writer.

Make Time to Think

As a writer, a lot of my job is in my head. I have to have periods of quiet reflection to plot out my words. My writing is 1,000 times better when I have had time to reflect and think about what I want to say.

I do a lot of thinking at night after the children go to bed. This planning time enables me to clarify what I need to do for the next day.

Disconnect

The Internet is amazing, but it is also the Queen of distractions. I don’t use these, but I’ve seen some pretty cool apps that you can download that will actually prevent you from accessing the Internet during certain periods.

I have to have online access for research, but I try to avoid time suckers like social media and e-mail during my writing time.

Don’t Skip Meals

You know what causes distractions from writing? Hunger.

Not only does your brain not function as well without food, but if you are hungry, you’ll be thinking about how you want a sandwich, not about your work.

I often have trouble with this one, because when I get into the zone, I want to keep going until I finish. However, if I equip myself with food in advance (and sometimes snacks while I’m working), then I won’t lose focus due to hunger.


Want more tips on how to stay focused while writing? Comecheck out my companion post at Daily Mayo!

Brenda is a fellow book-lover and coffee-addict. She is a freelance writer, punctuation nerd, and grammar enthusiast. Her favorite book genres are Science Fiction, Fantasy with a Twist, and Dystopian. Brenda blogs about books, writing and more at Daily Mayo. Find her here on CaW for Writing Tips Wednesdays the first Wednesday of every month.

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Wednesday, January 7, 2015

The Best Writing Tips Wednesdays Posts of 2014


It’s a new year! Happy New Year everyone!

I thought today I would share with you my favorite Coffee-Addicted Writer Writing Tips posts from 2014. Enjoy!












Here’s to a healthy, successful writing career in 2015!

Brenda is a fellow book-lover and coffee-addict. She is a freelance writer, punctuation nerd, and grammar enthusiast. Her favorite book genres are Science Fiction, Fantasy with a Twist, and Dystopian. Brenda blogs about books, writing and more at Daily Mayo. Find her here on CaW for Writing Tips Wednesdays the first Wednesday of every month.

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Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Writing Tips Wednesday: Music to Listen to While Writing


Many book-lovers are also music-lovers. Books and music go hand-in-hand as a sort of general artistic/emotional expression. Change the music that you listen to with a book and the reading experience will be completely different. For example, if you are reading to a child’s story and play happy music, it will feel light and fun. But if you change the music to eerie, creepy-sounding music, the story will feel terrifying. Music really can influence how a story feels.

In fact, I know of a few authors who specifically create soundtracks for their books and recommend that readers listen to that music while they read the story. I haven’t done this on a regular basis, but I bet it could enhance the reading experience by quite a lot. There are definitely a lot of authors who use music while writing to help focus the feelings they are trying to convey in a scene.

I read once that Douglas Adams listened to the Paul Simon album “One Trick Pony” while writing The Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy.

Using music to influence writing is quite effective, at least for me. I love putting on background music when I am trying to write (even for work). I tend to choose music that has interest but isn’t distracting. Some of my favorite writing artists include:

  • Frightened Rabbit
  • Mumford and Sons
  • Deadmau5
  • Biffy Clyro
  • Mozart
  • Bach
  • Band of Horses


If you love the music/book combo, then you won’t want to miss these 12 hit songs inspired by literature. And these songs were all inspired by The Hobbit or LOTR. When you look, you can find thousands of songs that were inspired by authors, writing, or literature. It’s an amazing world out there for a book lover!


What are your favorite songs to listen to while writing? 
Brenda is a fellow book-lover and coffee-addict. She is a freelance writer, punctuation nerd, and grammar enthusiast. Her favorite book genres are Science Fiction, Fantasy with a Twist, and Dystopian. Brenda blogs about books, writing and more at Daily Mayo. Find her here on CaW for Writing Tips Wednesdays the first Wednesday of every month.

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Wednesday, November 5, 2014

5 Signs of Weak Writing


We all do it sometimes. We throw together something quickly- whether it is a book or blog post, and let it out into the world. But writing becomes so much better if you take a bit of time to eliminate weak writing.

Weak writing says, “I am new to writing!” Even if you aren’t new to writing, your content will be passed over if it overuses weak writing.

So, what is a sign of weak writing? Eliminate these weak elements and your writing will improve dramatically and you won’t have to work much harder at all! That is something I call a giant win.

Tons of Adverbs and Adjectives

Adverbs and adjectives are useful tools in writing, and often necessary, but when your writing is peppered with adverbs and adjectives, it can start to sound like a Thesaurus. If your big, brown, knarred, oak tree waves its weighty branches weakly in the cool, soft, autumnal breeze; then you don’t have a story, you have a dictionary.

Overuse of a Single Word

This particular weakness drives me crazy. I know it is fun to show off your favorite word of the week in your writing, but if every paragraph uses the word “surreptitiously” then the reader will get bored.

“Telling” Actions

This is where the writer states a fact, rather than telling a fact. One of my favorite quotes talks about this issue. If Stacy just feels “sad” that her grandmother died, the story will be rather flat.

Too Many Passive Sentences

I love a good passive sentence, but too many will make the reader feel like she needs to take a nap. I don’t think that passive sentences should always be avoided, but try to have a mix between passive and active.

Too Many Lazy Words

What is a lazy word? Lazy words are vague and boring. Some of the most common offenders are:
  • Stuff
  • Went
  • Was
  • Got
  • Very
  • Are
  • A lot

You won’t be able to eliminate all of these words all of the time (nor should you), but watching out for them can prevent your writing from sounding generic.

You want people to read and enjoy what you write, right? That is why eliminating signs of weak writing in your content will benefit you in numerous ways. You will write better and become more popular when you eliminate weakness in your writing.



Brenda is a fellow book-lover and coffee-addict. She is a freelance writer, punctuation nerd, and grammar enthusiast. Her favorite book genres are Science Fiction, Fantasy with a Twist, and Dystopian. Brenda blogs about books, writing and more at Daily Mayo. Find her here on CaW for Writing Tips Wednesdays the first Wednesday of every month.

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Wednesday, October 1, 2014

Writing Tips Wednesday: Tips for Writing Horror from 5 Horror Masters



It’s October, which means it is the scariest month of the year! Today, I am going to talk about how to make writing sound scary- in case any of you are interested in picking up some horror writing tips.

Now, I am not talking about writing that is scary because the grammar and spelling is so bad. Nope, today, we are going to dissect some of the writing from the horror masters and see what it is about their writing that makes them successful.

Now, everyone probably has their own personal interpretation of what makes writing scary, but I have identified five categories below that many horror writers employ. These categories are suspense, unexpected things, weird things, and gross things.

Many of my favorite horror authors, including Neil Gaiman, Stephen King, Edgar Allen Poe, and HP Lovecraft employ these elements in their stories.

Suspense

If you state something abruptly, there isn’t time to develop fear for it. Suspense is a necessity in any horror story. The Tell-Tale Heart is quite short, but it spends at least half of the story building up suspense. Take a look at this passage- this is just after the narrator has come into the room to murder the man:

“Presently I heard a slight groan, and I knew it was the groan of mortal terror. It was not a groan of pain or of grief --oh, no! --it was the low stifled sound that arises from the bottom of the soul when overcharged with awe. I knew the sound well. Many a night, just at midnight, when all the world slept, it has welled up from my own bosom, deepening, with its dreadful echo, the terrors that distracted me. I say I knew it well. I knew what the old man felt, and pitied him, although I chuckled at heart. I knew that he had been lying awake ever since the first slight noise, when he had turned in the bed. His fears had been ever since growing upon him. He had been trying to fancy them causeless, but could not. He had been saying to himself --"It is nothing but the wind in the chimney --it is only a mouse crossing the floor," or "It is merely a cricket which has made a single chirp." Yes, he had been trying to comfort himself with these suppositions: but he had found all in vain. All in vain; because Death, in approaching him had stalked with his black shadow before him, and enveloped the victim. And it was the mournful influence of the unperceived shadow that caused him to feel --although he neither saw nor heard --to feel the presence of my head within the room.”

The Unknown

What is the scariest thing? Fear. And if you know what something is, you fear it less. So, the longer a story goes without telling you want the scary thing is, the scarier the final reveal will actually be. The Turn of the Screw is a prime example of building up the fear of the unknown:

“But it was a comfort that there could be no uneasiness in a connection with anything so beatific as the radiant image of my little girl, the vision of whose angelic beauty had probably more than anything else to do with me restlessness that, before morning, made me several times rise and wander about my room to take in the whole picture and prospect; to watch, from my open window, the faint summer dawn, to look at such portions of the rest of the house as I could catch, and to listen, while, in the fading dusk, the first birds began to twitter, for the possible recurrence of a sound or two, less natural and not without, but within, that I had fancied I heard. There had been a moment when I believed I recognized, faint and far, the cry of a child; there had been another when I found myself just consciously starting as at the passage, before my door, of a light footstep. But these fancies were not marked enough not to be thrown off, and it is only in the light, or the gloom, I should rather say, of other and subsequent matters that they now come back to me.”

Unexpected Events

When something unexpected happens, it is scarier. This is a common technique employed by horror writers. One of my favorite examples is from The Lord of the Flies:

“Maybe there is a beast… maybe it's only us.” 

The idea that every person is capable of indescribable horrors is one of the most terrifying ideas of all.

Weird or Shocking Things

Most characters in horror novels are insane. Their insanity makes them unpredicible, which is why they are terrifying. Most of these insane characters have sadistic views and twisted likes. For example, take the character of Patrick Bateman from American Psycho:

"My pain is constant and sharp and I do not hope for a better world for anyone. In fact, I want my pain to be inflicted on others. I want no one to escape."


Gross Things

Gross things are always scarier than non-gross things. That is why, for example, a mummy is scarier than a leprechaun. Take for example, this passage from The Road:

“He started down the rough wooden steps. He ducked his head and then flicked the lighter and swung the flame out over the darkness like an offering. Coldness and damp. An ungodly stench. He could see part of a stone wall. Clay floor. An old mattress darkly stained. He crouched and stepped down again and held out the light. Huddled against the back wall were naked people, male and female, all trying to hide, shielding their faces with their hands. On the mattress lay a man with his legs gone to the hip and the stumps of them blackened and burnt. The smell was hideous.
Jesus, he whispered.
Then one by one they turned and blinked in the pitiful light. Help us, they whispered. Please help us.”
This scene has many gross words that incite all the senses: stench, coldness, damp, nakedness, stumps of flesh, burned skin, stained mattresses, and flickering light bulbs. You can’t help but be frightened by all the ugliness and gross. 


And to wrap things up, the horror master himself has this to say about what makes a story scary:

“The 3 types of terror: The Gross-out: the sight of a severed head tumbling down a flight of stairs, it's when the lights go out and something green and slimy splatters against your arm. The Horror: the unnatural, spiders the size of bears, the dead waking up and walking around, it's when the lights go out and something with claws grabs you by the arm. And the last and worse one: Terror, when you come home and notice everything you own had been taken away and replaced by an exact substitute. It's when the lights go out and you feel something behind you, you hear it, you feel its breath against your ear, but when you turn around, there's nothing there...”
--Stephen King

What are your favorite scary passages from literature?

Brenda is a fellow book-lover and coffee-addict. She is a freelance writer, punctuation nerd, and grammar enthusiast. Her favorite book genres are Science Fiction, Fantasy with a Twist, and Dystopian. Brenda blogs about books, writing and more at Daily Mayo. Find her here on CaW for Writing Tips Wednesdays the first Wednesday of every month.

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Wednesday, September 3, 2014

Grammar Rules As Explained by Internet Memes

Grammar can be a confusing mess of rules. If you don’t remember the rules, it can be difficult to write with the meaning you intend. Luckily, the Internet has made it easier to remember common grammar rules thanks to grammar memes. Here are my favorite _ grammar memes to help you remember commonly ignored grammar rules:

The Oatmeal offers a variety of helpful grammar memes, including my favorite of all time, the semicolon meme. Visit the source link; it's hilarious.



Here is another helpful Oatmeal meme:



The easiest way to remember whether to use who or whom:



You’ll never find me on the side against the Oxford Comma, and here is why:



Grammarly knows all the fun grammar tips, including this one about commas:



This is probably my biggest grammar peeve right now:


Just remember, even though you feel like this for correcting someone’s grammar,




This is how they will feel about you. So be kind!



And here is a cheat sheet to make it all easier:


What are your favorite grammar memes? 

Brenda is a fellow book-lover and coffee-addict. She is a freelance writer, punctuation nerd, and grammar enthusiast. Her favorite book genres are Science Fiction, Fantasy with a Twist, and Dystopian. Brenda blogs about books, writing and more at Daily Mayo. Find her here on CaW for Writing Tips Wednesdays the first Wednesday of every month.

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Wednesday, August 6, 2014

6 Songs That Were Made for Writers


This month, I have songs about books on the brain. Last week on Daily Mayo, I made a list of 12 hit songs that are inspired by books.

Today, I decided it would be fun to look and see if any songs feature the writing process. Although a lot of songs have literary themes, few that I found actually were specifically about writing.

The best songs about writing that I uncovered are listed below:

Party for the Fight to Write-- Atmosphere



This song is about the writing process- mainly about the struggle to be a good band, but much of the lyrics can also apply to prose writers. The chorus and a few significant lines feel like references to the writing process- and in one line he references the book The Outsiders by S. E. Hinton.

Biggest reference to writing: “And he said some got pencils and some got guns, some know how to stand and some of them run; we don't get along, but we sing the same song – party for the fight to write, and write on.”

Open Book – Cake



This song is more about a boyfriend not knowing how to read his girlfriend than it is about actually writing, but there are plenty of lyrics that could be taken literally.

Biggest reference to writing:

"She's writing, she's weaving
Conceiving a plot
It quickens, it thickens
You can't put it down now
It takes you, it shakes you
It makes you lose your thought"

Losing It—Rush



Losing It is basically about the fear of failure and never quite reaching your dreams- as it happens to most people. In the song, a dancer and a writer are both mentioned. Rush sums up the point of the song with the lines:

Wednesday, July 2, 2014

5 Sites That Will Help You Improve Your Grammar Skills


Let’s talk about grammar for a bit.

I know it is one of the most-hated subjects in all the world, but to me, grammar is the foundation for clear written communication. Grammar is the body language of the written word (Tweet this).

You may hate grammar now, but grammar doesn’t have to be boring and dry. Grammar can be fun!

Just consider the myriad of grammar jokes floating around out there. Here are some of my favorites:

The Past, the Preset, and the Future walked into a bar. It was tense.

Why did the comma break up with the apostrophe?

Because it was too possessive.

Wednesday, June 4, 2014

Writing Tips Wednesdays: 10 Simple Writing Exercises to Improve Your Writing Skills

It's time for another Writing Tips Wednesday!

As a professional writer, I often get bogged down with writing about boring topics. Sometimes, it is difficult to switch between corporate writing and the freer style of the online world or fiction writing.

One of my favorite ways to improve writing or take on a different voice is to try a variety of writing exercises. I find that conducting a writing exercise is an excellent way to refresh your writing brain to come up with something when you have a mental block.

If you want to refresh your writing, try the following 10 writing exercises to improve your writing skills:

Free Writing

This simplewriting tip is one of the easiest in the world. There are no rules in this writing exercise. This exercise is perfect for trying to get over writer’s block.

Character Interviews

I like to use thiswriting exercise to develop a character beyond the basics. While I don’t write a lot of fiction, it is helpful for trying to define what a character is or isn’t based on how they would answer interview questions.

Writing Blind

What would it be like to writewithout the use of sight? Use descriptions pulled from touch, smell, and sound rather than based on appearance or color.

Write Without Me

This is a fun narrative for learning to talk about yourself withoutusing “I” pronouns all the time. This is also helpful for business writing, like for cover letters and resumes!

Character Portraits

This simplewriting exercise enables you to write about a stranger based on what you imagine their personality to be rather than the physical description. This helps create fully fleshed-out characters in stories.

Describe the Abstract

Can you describe adjectives? This exercise has you describewords that already descriptive words to help expand your writing ability.

Get Quiet

Sometimes thebest writing tip is simple to move to another location. This tip explains the virtues of writing in a quite environment.

15 Minute Writing

Have you tried blockwriting? Block writing is one simple way to improve your writing in just a short amount of time.

The Cover of Darkness

This exercise illustrates the importance of usingan unusual prospective while writing. This particular exercise focuses on a lack of light and color, but you could also try on a different planet, under the water, behind a mirror, or any other number of unusual situations.

Group Writing

Writing with a support group is an excellent way to improve your writing skills. Try writing the same story with multiple people for even more fun!


What are your favorite writing exercises? 
Brenda is a fellow book-lover and coffee-addict. She is a freelance writer, punctuation nerd, and grammar enthusiast. Her favorite book genres are Science Fiction, Fantasy with a Twist, and Dystopian. Brenda blogs about books, writing and more at Daily Mayo. Find her here on CaW for Writing Tips Wednesdays the first Wednesday of every month.

Follow Brenda on Facebook and Twitter or subscribe to updates from Daily Mayo to keep up with all the exciting things in her life; ranging from drinking coffee to get through the day to drinking coffee just for fun.